Check my English lyrics

Hi, I’m a French singer and I’ve written a song with English lyrics, but I have some doubts about them.

I’m looking for an English native speaker who could tell me if my lyrics are Ok or if I need to make a few changes.

The person I will hire won’t have to rewrite the song or anything, just to validate my lyrics or tell me if I need to come up with other ideas by highlighting what’s wrong or sound strange and writing a few comments.

I will send an mp3 of the song, if it helps.